8 to 12 seconds4 beats
The ten-second scroll stopper: one role, one number, one action
The highest-volume script here and the one most employers should start with. It has no story, no arc and no narrator. It puts the job, the money and the way in on screen before a thumb can move, and it stops.
ten-second-scroll-stopper.txt
4 beats, plain text, free to reuse
{like this} is yours to replace. Everything else is wording you can keep.
- Best for
- Hourly and shift roles you are hiring for continuously: warehouse, hospitality, retail, care, drivers, trades. Also the right shape for any role where the pay is the strongest thing you have.
- Target length
- 8 to 12 seconds
- Format
- 9:16 for Reels, Stories and TikTok. Cut a 4:5 of the same build for feeds.
- What you need to shoot
- Nothing you do not already have. Ten seconds of someone doing the actual work, shot on a phone, is enough. A locked-off wide of the workplace will do if you have no people cleared to film.
The trap. Spending the first two seconds on a logo animation. In a paid feed those two seconds are the whole audition, and a logo answers a question nobody asked. Put the brand mark in the corner and give the middle of the frame to the job.
The beats
0 to 2 seconds
- On camera
- The work itself, already in progress. The van being loaded, the arc struck, the pass being cooked, the ward at handover. No title card, no establishing shot, no drone.
- Words and cards
- {Role title} in {town or city}. Set it on screen in the first frame, not the second. Assume sound off: if the line is not readable, it does not exist.
2 to 4 seconds
- On camera
- Hold the same shot. Do not cut yet. One card slides in under the title.
- Words and cards
- {The pay, as a number.} Hourly rate, shift rate or annual band. If you genuinely cannot publish a figure, publish the thing that moves it: the shift premium, the licence, the years. Never write competitive.
4 to 7 seconds
- On camera
- First cut. A second angle of the same job, or a colleague in it. Two shots is the whole edit.
- Words and cards
- {The one condition that decides whether this job fits their life.} The shift pattern, the start time, the site, whether it is inside or outside. This is the line that saves you the screening call.
7 to 10 seconds
- On camera
- Hold on a person, not on a flat brand card. Wordmark over the footage, bottom corner, inside the safe zone.
- Words and cards
- {One way to apply, and where.} One route. Not a phone number and a QR code and a link. The route you actually check.